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. Shiki-sama . by =TheArta:iconTheArta:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Digital Media > Cartoons > Drawings

©2009 =TheArta
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Finally finished ~ and I am so proud of myself. ^^ =P
I am not that good at my art so I think that this is a little step up for my skills. Though some stuffs (I don`t wanna say, so you won`t notice them. xDD Well if they are not noticable enough.) are pretty wrong and I misspelled a word on the wall (guess which? :D) and I did not save the raw version properly so I could not fix it lol I am such a fail at some times.. xD

I love doing all the small stuffs - the make-up was heaven for me and other tiny elements made my day.

And thanks for those who shared opinions about the colors, but I kind of came down to this and I don`t know how. I just ... just colored. ._.

For the first time I used SAI program. ^^ When I first tried it a while back, I was pissed at it and hoped that I will never have to see it again. xD But somehow I pulled myself together, set up some setting and it worked for me perfectly and now I can say - I LOVE SAI PaintTool. ^D^


Shiki-sama is friggin rich (I remembered talking with *TonomuraBix that we wanna have lots of money ;DD) and everyone will do anything he says. Noone dares to talk back to him or even look at him the wrong way. He is sarcastic and doesn`t care for anyone. He is eccentric and everyone secretly admires him because of that. He doesn`t give a sh!t about anything, though he loves to buy ugly dirty places and make them into stunning and dark clubs or mansions. He loves for everything to be perfect around him and hates boring people with their boring day life.
Yes.. just because he is Shiki-sama.
FEAR HIS CALM FACE. :D

:bulletgreen: SAI+wacom
:bulletgreen: ~5 h.
:bulletgreen: Wallpaper: [link]

:heart: Commentsxfaves are lovable. :hug:

Critiques


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~alvonia Apr 25, 2009, 10:30:31 AM
I was really drawn to the amount of detail that went into this image. Overall the image is nicely done and I feel drawn to the color scheme. But the first thing I notice is how large his head is... in your drawing, the length of his head and neck is the same as the length from shoulder to navel, whereas it should reach only to about the sternum. I understand you're working in a style, but sometimes large heads, eyes, ect become more a draw back, because the viewer will focus on the anatomy instead of the other beautiful things you've added. Try flipping the image horizontally, it makes things you would have missed earlier really stand out. I like the color scheme, but as it is extremely limited you could have made other choices to bring the image together better. For example, the wall paper is a warm green, but his clothing is a cool green, I would suggest sampling the colors for his clothing from the wall paper. Also, the skin appears waxy and lifeless. You have introduced red into the color scheme in the shirt and eye make up, I would have added a pinkish tint to the skin to make him look less zombie-like. I love the little details added to the hat and around his eye, would definitely love to see a full body. Good job!
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*TonomuraBix Apr 26, 2009, 10:24:29 PM
i really love all of the different textures and patterns of his outfit!! I also love his lips. :o Also the detailed eye makeup is really cool.. and heck i wouldn't mind being bossed around by him. ;D

I think the critique given up there is pretty fair and points out a lot of things that could be improved on, but there's still plenty to love about this too, you did a good job! <3

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=TheArta Apr 27, 2009, 4:58:17 AM
Thank you for leaving a comment. :heart: And complimenting stuffs. 8D~
And I totally agree with the critique, anyways, I am just learning ~ all the time. ^^

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*chulii-stock Apr 27, 2009, 4:58:58 AM
wow, such a great work :wow:

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=TheArta Apr 27, 2009, 11:32:48 PM
Thank you. :hug:

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~Nightrose64 Apr 28, 2009, 7:26:03 AM
cool :D

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Rock On And Respect \m/
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=TheArta Apr 28, 2009, 7:48:55 AM
Thanks. :aww:

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#MonotoneRainbows A place for your skill.
Sketchblog - [link]
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~Nightrose64 Apr 28, 2009, 8:04:33 AM
your welcome :D

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Rock On And Respect \m/
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~ZoeySanny May 7, 2009, 3:14:49 PM
with my amateurish eye it's simply pretty ^^

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=TheArta May 8, 2009, 3:45:34 AM
Thank you. :aww:

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